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“Metamorphoses” (The Giants’ War) – Ovid

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    The Giant (1943) 

 

      Nicholas Roerich


          _________

 


The Giants’ War

            Nor were the Gods themselves more safe above;  

“justice” might have returned to Heaven

but that didn’t mean the Gods there 

were not affected by strife, nor immune 


            Against beleaguer’d Heav’n the giants move. 

 

where do the giants come from, who 

knows, I suspect there might be a

vestigial recollection here of larger 

entities, dinosaurs, for instance, 

lurking in our prehistoric memory, 

our primeval consciousness, finding 

expression and acknowledgment 

in our myths


            Hills pil’d on hills, on mountains mountains lie,
            To make their mad approaches to the skie. 

 

the giants were piling hills on hills, 

mountains on mountains, building 

pathways, however “mad”

notion, to the “skie”, or sky

 

see above


            ‘Till Jove, no longer patient, took his time
            T’ avenge with thunder their audacious crime: 

 

Jove, god of thunder

 

            Red light’ning plaid along the firmament,
            And their demolish’d works to pieces rent. 

 

lightning “plaid”, or played, at the edge 

of the heavens, destroying there the 

“works” the giants had erected, the 

high hills, the expanded, the extended, 

mountains

 

rent, past participle of the verb to rend,

to tear asunder

 

            Sing’d with the flames, and with the bolts transfixt,
            With native Earth, their blood the monsters mixt; 

 

the blood of these giants, “[s]ing’d with 

flames”, and “transfixt”, or pierced, 

riven, by thunderbolts, mixes with earth

 

            The blood, indu’d with animating heat, 

 

hot, propulsive, generating blood

 

indu’d, or endued, which is to say,

supplied with

 

            Did in th’ impregnant Earth new sons beget: 

 

the blood of the giants impregnates 

the Earth, begetting sons, there, and 

daughters 


            They, like the seed from which they sprung, accurst, 

            Against the Gods immortal hatred nurst,


the sins of the father are carried on to  

their sons, and daughters, who maintain, 

have maintained, “nurst”, or nursed, the 

primitive rancour

 

            An impious, arrogant, and cruel brood;
            Expressing their original from blood. 

 

the children of the giants were recognizably 

the children of these “original[s]”, these

preliminary giants, an impious, arrogant, 

and cruel brood”


            Which when the king of Gods beheld from high 

 

the king of Gods, Jove


            (Withal revolving in his memory, 

            What he himself had found on Earth of late,
            Lycaon’s guilt, and his inhumane treat), 

 

“withal revolving”, or having revolved,

considered,“in his memory”, what he’d 

recently seen on Earth, the reprehensible 

behaviour of a certain Lycaon, Lycaon’s

monstrous discourtesies, his “inhumane

treat[ment]”, of which we’ll hear later

 

            He sigh’d; nor longer with his pity strove;
            But kindled to a wrath becoming Jove: 

an ire, a fury, worthy of the king of Gods 

 

stay tuned

 


R ! chard

 


 

 

“Metamorphoses” (The Brazen Age / The Iron Age ) – Ovid

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     British Industries. Steel 

 

              Richard Jack

 

                  _______

 

 

The Brazen Age
 

          To this came next in course, the brazen age:
          A warlike offspring, prompt to bloody rage,
          Not impious yet… 

 

brazen, of brass, the pride, and collective 

title, of the military, not to mention of

industrialists, CEOs, still 

 

yet…., or the Iron Age, follows

 

 

The Iron Age
 

          Hard steel succeeded then:
          And stubborn as the metal, were the men.
          Truth, modesty, and shame, the world forsook:
          Fraud, avarice, and force, their places took. 

 

remember conscience, from the Golden Age,

now, during this Iron Age“fors[aken]”

 

          Then sails were spread, to every wind that blew.
          Raw were the sailors, and the depths were new: 

 

note “sails” here, a perfect example of a

metonymy, where the word means not 

only the cloth, the canvas that catches 

the wind, but also its larger self, the 

ship, which benefits from that integral

propulsive action, like the body the

heart 

 

          Trees, rudely hollow’d, did the waves sustain;  

 

hollowed out trees could manage to

remain above the water, could float

 

          E’re ships in triumph plough’d the watry plain.

 

our archetype here would again be Columbus,

however ignominiously


          Then land-marks limited to each his right:
          For all before was common as the light. 

 

though all land had earlier been common,

available to all to freely enjoy, now fences,

signposts prohibited collective access


          Nor was the ground alone requir’d to bear
          Her annual income to the crooked share, 

 

crooked, awry, disproportionate


          But greedy mortals, rummaging her store,
          Digg’d from her entrails first the precious oar; 

 

“greedy mortals”, mining, not only from

“the ground alone”, but from the earth’s 

very “entrails”, her “oar”, or ore


          Which next to Hell, the prudent Gods had laid;
          And that alluring ill, to sight display’d. 

 

the “prudent Gods” had set the precious 

metals near that unholy place to ward off,

however ineffectually, eventually, potential  

pilferers, plunderers 

 

          Thus cursed steel, and more accursed gold,
          Gave mischief birth, and made that mischief bold: 

 

or again Truth, modesty, and shame, the 

world forsook: / Fraud, avarice, and force, 

their places took.“, lines 3 and 4 from the 

top


          And double death did wretched Man invade,
          By steel assaulted, and by gold betray’d, 

 

double death, assault and betrayal, invade, 

become components, properties, of Man


          Now (brandish’d weapons glittering in their hands)
          Mankind is broken loose from moral bands; 

 

immoralities follow


          No rights of hospitality remain:
          The guest, by him who harbour’d him, is slain,
          The son-in-law pursues the father’s life;
          The wife her husband murders, he the wife.
          The step-dame poyson for the son prepares;
          The son inquires into his father’s years. 

 

the stuff, at present, of all of our arts and 

literature, of our collective consciousness, 

we are the Iron Age

 

where


          Faith flies, and piety in exile mourns;
          And justice, here opprest, to Heav’n returns. 

 

“justice” has flown, fled, to Heaven,

to our universal, and grievous, 

distress

 

 

R ! chard

 

 

 

 

 

 

Metamorphoses (The Silver Age) – Ovid

poor-woman-of-the-village

      “Poor Woman of the Village” 

 

              Gustave Courbet


                 ___________

 


the good times wouldn’t last, however,

discord among the gods would bring 

on the Silver Age 

 

           But when good Saturn, banish’d from above,
           Was driv’n to Hell, the world was under Jove. 

 

Saturn, god of plenty, had presided over 

the Golden Age

 

Jove, or Jupiter, god of thunder, was 

king of the gods

 

there would be consequences for this

disarrangement, this strife


           Succeeding times a silver age behold,
           Excelling brass, but more excell’d by gold. 

 

silver might not have been gold, but it

was still better than brass, as, later,

we’ll see

 

           Then summer, autumn, winter did appear:
           And spring was but a season of the year. 

 

no longer “immortal” 

 

by casting Saturn into the Underworld, Jove

set off the cycle of the seasons, whereby

Saturn, clutching his way back to the realm

of the deities, after his initial fall, would inspire

regeneration, the return of springtime, for a

while, before being ousted again, and again, 

and again


           The sun his annual course obliquely made,
           Good days contracted, and enlarg’d the bad. 

 

in keeping with the suns “oblique[ ]” 

progressions, not parallel, not at  

right angles

 

           Then air with sultry heats began to glow;
           The wings of winds were clogg’d with ice and snow; 

 

the emergence of heat and cold


           And shivering mortals, into houses driv’n,
           Sought shelter from th’ inclemency of Heav’n. 

 

see above

 

           Those houses, then, were caves, or homely sheds;
           With twining oziers fenc’d; and moss their beds. 

 

oziers, or osiers, shrubs of which the 

branches have traditionally been used 

to make baskets, basketry

 

           Then ploughs, for seed, the fruitful furrows broke, 
           And oxen labour’d first beneath the yoke.


not to mention Man, the advent of agriculture,

toil

 


R ! chard

 


 


 

“Metamorphoses” (The Golden Age) – Ovid

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    “Field of Poppies (1873) 

 

           Claude Monet

 

               _______

 

 

once the Creation is complete, Time 

becomes one of its components, ages, 

or eras, or epochs ensue giving credence 

to the fact of an evolutionary process,

instead of stasis a continuation of the 

inner workings of primordial Chaos still 

roils, bristles, but among more orderly 

elements now 

 

so that the first age, The Golden Age,

is positively blissful 


             The golden age was first; when Man yet new,
             No rule but uncorrupted reason knew: 

 

Evil was not yet even a concept 


             And, with a native bent, did good pursue. 

 

a native bent, naturally, by instinct, inately

 

             Unforc’d by punishment, un-aw’d by fear,
             His words were simple, and his soul sincere; 

 

therefore


             Needless was written law, where none opprest: 

 

where no one offended, laws were 

unnecessary


             The law of Man was written in his breast: 

 

a function of his emotions


             No suppliant crowds before the judge appear’d,
             No court erected yet, nor cause was heard: 

 

suppliant crowds, petitioners for justice

 

             But all was safe, for conscience was their guard. 

 

remember conscience, something that too

often now has fallen, it seems, by the 

wayside

 

though we’re a long way off at present, 

admittedly, from the Golden Age


             The mountain-trees in distant prospect please, 

 

please is a verb here, as in the mountain-trees 

bring pleasure

 

but


             E’re yet the pine descended to the seas: 

 

E’re, or before, the pine trees descended, 

grew closer to, gravitated toward, the water

 

compare here, ” About her coasts, unruly 

waters roar; / And rising, on a ridge, 

insult the shore.”, from earlierwhere 

“water vies with earth for its place upon 

the strand”

 

instead of water, Earth encroaches here, 

an equally formidable opponent 

 

             E’re sails were spread, new oceans to explore: 

 

E’re, or before, ships set out to conquer,

see Columbus for the archetypal example


             And happy mortals, unconcern’d for more,
             Confin’d their wishes to their native shore. 

 

a world without an economy


             No walls were yet; nor fence, nor mote, nor mound,
             Nor drum was heard, nor trumpet’s angry sound: 

 

drums and trumpets at any distance 

would’ve been cause for alarm, or at

the very least caution

 

             Nor swords were forg’d; but void of care and crime, 

 

note the negative no, nor, nor hammered out

through the last three verses, describing by 

omission the state of the original age, 

what there was not


             The soft creation slept away their time. 

 

soft creation, not inclined to struggle


             The teeming Earth, yet guiltless of the plough,
             And unprovok’d, did fruitful stores allow: 

             Content with food, which Nature freely bred,
             On wildings and on strawberries they fed; 

 

the subject here throughout is the “teeming 

Earth”, the Earth, metonymized, becomes 

earthlings – therefore “they” replaces 

“teeming Earth” as subject in the last two 

lines – who’d feed on wildings, uncultivated 

plants, crab apples, for instance, strawberries


             Cornels and bramble-berries gave the rest,
             And falling acorns furnish’d out a feast. 

 

Cornels, shrubs 


             The flow’rs unsown, in fields and meadows reign’d: 

 

flowers bloomed unbidden, covering fields

 

see above 

 

I watch the cherry blossoms grace our 

streets with their opulence as I speak,

decking our April days with springtime, 

still, even thousands of years later“,

a remnant, a bequest, of that golden 

past 


             And Western winds immortal spring maintain’d. 

 

like very Paradise, stretching into even 

immortality


             In following years, the bearded corn ensu’d
             From Earth unask’d, nor was that Earth renew’d. 

 

renew’d, tilled, harvested


             From veins of vallies, milk and nectar broke; 

 

valleys engender streams that create 

the conditions for milk and nectar


             And honey sweating through the pores of oak.

 

or our own indigenous syrup of maple

 

 

R ! chard

 

 

 

 

“Metamorphoses” – Ovid, 105

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    The Creation(1935) 

 

           Aaron Douglas

 

               ________

 


it should be noted that this exemplary 

translation of Metamorphoses was 

done by a clutch of eminent poets, 

John Dryden principally, England’s 

first Poet Laureate, 1688, but with 

the help of, notably, Joseph Addison,  

Alexander Pope, and William 

Congreve, among a number of 

celebrated others, under the 

direction of the poet and physician,

Samuel Garth, in no later than 1717, 

over 300 hundred years ago

 

this will explain the sometimes 

disorienting spelling of some 

otherwise common words, you’ve

read alreadyfor instance, extreams” 

for “extremes”“watry” for “watery”, 

“blustring” for “blustering” 

 

it might also be that my own reading

of the text could be influenced by 

idiosyncratic interpretations given 

by the above poets, who would’ve 

written according to the perspectives 

of their own time, the 18th Century, 

somewhat altering, most likely, the 

pristine intentions of Ovid’s original

 

as I myself, however philologically 

scrupulously – mea culpa, mea 

culpa, mea maxima culpaI must 

contritely confess – can, can 

 

be forewarned

 

 

but onwards to the completion of 

the Creation

 

            High o’er the clouds, and empty realms of wind,
           The God a clearer space for Heav’n design’d;
           Where fields of light, and liquid aether flow; 

 

a description of Heaven, “fields of light and 

liquid aether”


            Purg’d from the pondrous dregs of Earth below. 

 

“the pondrous dregs of Earth”, our dwelling

 

             Scarce had the Pow’r distinguish’d these, when streight
            The stars, no longer overlaid with weight,
            Exert their heads, from underneath the mass;
           And upward shoot, and kindle as they pass, 


“the Pow’r”, or “the God, whatever God was he”, 

earlier noted

 

while gravitation again allows the “fields of light”, 

newly “distinguished”, or separated, from the 

pondrous dregs of Earth“, to “streight…upward 

shoot, and kindle”, or sparkle, like firewood, or 

nebulae, aurorae, very constellations 

 

             And with diffusive light adorn their heav’nly place.


diffusive, evanescent, aetherial, nearly 

transcendental

 

             Then, every void of Nature to supply,
           With forms of Gods he fills the vacant sky:
           New herds of beasts he sends, the plains to share:
           New colonies of birds, to people air:
           And to their oozy beds, the finny fish repair. 

 

note that all life forms are “forms of Gods”,

and “birds”, anthropomorphically, no less

than “people air”

             A creature of a more exalted kind
           Was wanting yet, and then was Man design’d: 

 

the design follows


             Conscious of thought, of more capacious breast,
           For empire form’d, and fit to rule the rest: 

 

though the specific initial progenitor will remain 

ever the secret of that Creator


           Whether with particles of heav’nly fire
           The God of Nature did his soul inspire,
           Or Earth, but new divided from the sky

 

was it “heav’nly fire” or Earth”, which malleable

 

             And, pliant, still retain’d th’ aetherial energy: 

 

we are, in other words, quintessentially, 

however muddied, starlight

 

             Which wise Prometheus temper’d into paste,
           And, mixt with living streams, the godlike image cast. 

 

Prometheus is the Titan who fashioned 

us of clay, and gifted us with fire despite 

the opposition of the Gods, for which he 

was cruelly punished, but that’s another

story

 

             Thus, while the mute creation downward bend
            Their sight, and to their earthly mother tend, 

 

mute creation, species who have no 

language, animals, lizards, insects

 

             Man looks aloft; and with erected eyes
            Beholds his own hereditary skies. 

 

hereditary, received from the Creator,

the primordial ancestor, generator

 

             From such rude principles our form began;
           And earth was metamorphos’d into Man.


 

R ! chard

 

“Metamorphoses” – Ovid, 104

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      The West Wind (1891)

 

            Winslow Homer

 

               __________

 


next, the creation of climate 

         


          And as five zones th’ aetherial regions bind,

          Five, correspondent, are to Earth assign’d: 

 

the five zones are the equatorial zone, the two 

temperate zones, and the polar zones


          The sun with rays, directly darting down,

           Fires all beneath, and fries the middle zone: 

 

the equator gets the brunt of it

 

          The two beneath the distant poles, complain

          Of endless winter, and perpetual rain. 

 

the poles get the other brunt of it

 

          Betwixt th’ extreams, two happier climates hold

          The temper that partakes of hot, and cold. 

 

temper”, as in “temperate”, as in zones

 

          The fields of liquid air, inclosing all, 

          Surround the compass of this earthly ball:


fields of liquid air, cloud covers

 

          The lighter parts lye next the fires above; 

 

fires above, the sun and the stars 


         The grosser near the watry surface move:


“grosser” air, less pure, less aetherial


          Thick clouds are spread, and storms engender there, 

          And thunder’s voice, which wretched mortals fear, 

          And winds that on their wings cold winter bear. 

 

they gravitate towards the denser earth, creating

conditions “there” for storms, strife, thunder

 

ever so ominously

         


          Nor were those blustring brethren left at large,

          On seas, and shores, their fury to discharge: 

 

blustring brethren, the winds, are not, we learn,  

not apportioned, not not allocated


          Bound as they are, and circumscrib’d in place,

          They rend the world, resistless, where they pass;

          And mighty marks of mischief leave behind;

          Such is the rage of their tempestuous kind. 

 

tempests, tsunamis, hurricanes

 

 

they call the winds 


          First Eurus to the rising morn is sent

          (The regions of the balmy continent);

          And Eastern realms, where early Persians run,

          To greet the blest appearance of the sun. 

          Westward, the wanton Zephyr wings his flight;

          Pleas’d with the remnants of departing light: 

          Fierce Boreas, with his off-spring, issues forth

          T’ invade the frozen waggon of the North.  

 

where we encounter, incidentally, aurorae borealis


          While frowning Auster seeks the Southern sphere;

          And rots, with endless rain, th’ unwholsom year.

 

it is to be noted that in 8 AD, when Metamorphoses 

was purportedly first published, one gathers from 

the text that the world was understood to be 

spherical, with two poles, the boreal and the 

austral, from which we later get the eponymously 

named Australia 

 

the world went flat, note, only later in the 

Middle Ages

 


R ! chard 

 


 

 


 

“Metamorphoses” – Ovid, 102

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   To Be Titled (1987) –

 

          Jean-Michel Basquiat

 

                     __________

 


next, according to Ovid, inspired, presumably,  

by the Gods, is what happens before the world 

is created

 

        Before the seas, and this terrestrial ball, 

 

which is to say, the earth

 

        And Heav’n’s high canopy, that covers all,

        One was the face of Nature; if a face:

 

the “face of Nature” was “One”, an 

indistinguishable, perhaps not even, “face”

 

        Rather a rude and indigested mass:

        A lifeless lump, unfashion’d, and unfram’d,

        Of jarring seeds; and justly Chaos nam’d.

 

this undifferentiated agglomeration, this “lifeless 

lump” was called Chaos

 

note the “seeds”, however, potential, though 

“jarring”, or conflicting, the genesis for what 

is to follow   

 

           No sun was lighted up, the world to view;

           No moon did yet her blunted horns renew:

 

the horns of the moon are visible when the 

crescent moon lies flat on the horizon, in 

the shape of a smile, presenting “horns”, 

the twin elevated extensions

 

           Nor yet was Earth suspended in the sky,

           Nor pois’d, did on her own foundations lye:

 

or lie

 

           Nor seas about the shores their arms had thrown;

           But earth, and air, and water, were in one.

 

see again Chaos here

 

           Thus air was void of light, and earth unstable,

           And water’s dark abyss unnavigable.

           No certain form on any was imprest;

           All were confus’d, and each disturb’d the rest.

           For hot and cold were in one body fixt;

           And soft with hard, and light with heavy mixt.

 

 

next, the first metamorphosis

 

stay tuned

 


R ! chard

 

 

 

“Metamorphoses” – Ovid, 101

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   “Primavera (1478) 

 

       Sandro Botticelli

 

             _________

 

 

a friend expressed some interest in Ovid’s

Metamorphoses recently after I’d sung for 

a few moments its praises, had told her I 

was revisiting it after some time with the 

intention of duly, this time, completing it, 

given that, hey, we’ve got lots of time, at 

present, all of us, on our hands, by very 

mandate  

 

it sounds wonderful, she briefed me after 

I’d sent her the appropriate link, but there 

are some parts I don’t understand

 

I’ll help, I said, only too eager to share 

the delights of this inprobable treasure,

a gift nearly two thousand years old, 

with the magic still of very revelation

 

Metamorphoses is a creation story, the 

equivalent of the Bible for those who 

revered the Roman deities, the same 

deities that the Greeks revered, but 

transplanted, renamed, to Roman 

stock, like the Puritans did their  

Christian seed at Plymouth Rock  

 

Ovid, 43 BC to 17/18 AD, was a Roman

poet, paying fealty to Augustus, Emperor

of Rome, 63 BC to 14 AD, therefore his 

Roman goddesses, gods, and his, 

contemporary, Latin

 

which was translated into English early 

in the Renaissance, but found its best

expression, to my mind still, in the 

eminent hands of Sir Samuel Garth,

John DrydenAlexander PopeJoseph

AddisonWilliam Congreve, among 

others in, already, 1717

 

listen 

 

The Creation of the World

 

       Of bodies chang’d to various forms, I sing:
 

Ovid is saying my topic is transformation, very

metamorphoses, plural of metamorphosis


       Ye Gods, from whom these miracles did spring,
       Inspire my numbers with coelestial heat;
       ‘Till I my long laborious work compleat:
       And add perpetual tenour to my rhimes,
       Deduc’d from Nature’s birth, to Caesar’s times. 

 

poets have traditionally called upon their related

muses to inspire them to accomplish their task,

Ovid invokes his Gods, compare Shakespeare’s 

O for a Muse of fire, that would ascend / The

brightest heaven of invention, his prologue to 

Henry V   

 

“Ye Gods”, Ovid says, from whom these 

miracles did spring”, those everyday wonders 

that surround us, inspire me, he asks, that I 

might “compleat”, which is to say complete, 

his poem, this long laborious work”

 

his “numbers” are his years, “coelestial”, or

celestial, “heat”, is inspiration

 

“tenour to my rimes” means rhythm, weight, 

to his poetry

 

“Nature’s birth”, or the beginning of time, to

“Caesar’s time”, Ovid‘s own period under

Augustus

 

Ovid asks the Gods to fuel him with the

fire to tell the story of the world from its 

very beginning to his own epoch,

Caesar’s 

 

how’s that for a project

 

 

enough for now

 

but stay tuned for, to follow, the Creation,

capital C, I tell you 

 

 

R ! chard

 

 

 

“Death is nothing at all…” – Henry Scott Holland

St_Paul's_by_Thomas_Hosmer_Shepherd_(early_19th_century)

     “St Paul’s Cathedral 

 

           Thomas Hosmer Shepherd


                          _____________

 

upon learning of the recent demise 

of my younger sister, my only sibling,

a friend sent me the following passage

 


    “Death is nothing at all. It does not count. I have only slipped away 

     into the next room. Nothing has happened. Everything remains 

     exactly as it was. I am I, and you are you, and the old life that we 

     lived so fondly together is untouched, unchanged. Whatever we 

     were to each other, that we are still. Call me by the old familiar 

     name. Speak of me in the easy way which you always used. Put 

     no difference into your tone. Wear no forced air of solemnity or 

     sorrow. Laugh as we always laughed at the little jokes that we 

     enjoyed together. Play, smile, think of me, pray for me. Let my 

     name be ever the household word that it always was. Let it be 

     spoken without an effort, without the ghost of a shadow upon it. 

     Life means all that it ever meant. It is the same as it ever was. 

     There is absolute and unbroken continuity. What is this death 

     but a negligible accident? Why should I be out of mind because 

     I am out of sight? I am but waiting for you, for an interval, 

     somewhere very near, just round the corner. All is well. Nothing 

     is hurt; nothing is lost. One brief moment and all will be as it was 

     before. How we shall laugh at the trouble of parting when we 

     meet again!”


 

it is usually presented as a poem, but 

was part of a sermon, rather, given by 

Henry Scott Holland, the very pastor 

who composed it, at St Paul’s 

Cathedral, in London, after the death 

of Edward Vll

 

listen

 


it expresses well the experience I’ve

had with others of my beloved 

departed

 

intimations of my sister are already 

popping up in my reality, soon, I told 

another friend, I’ll be talking to her 

more often than when she was not 

gone

 

much as is the case with my father, 

for instance, away some 30 years 

now, but an abiding presence, 

however mystical, still, and, 

it appears, forever

 

I consider myself profoundly 

blessed

 


R ! chard

 

 

 

who’s afraid of the subjunctive

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Impression, Sunrise” (1873)

Claude Monet

________

who’s afraid of the subjunctive

much like Elizabeth Taylor as Martha
in “Who’s Afraid of Virginia Woolf?”,
my answer is, I am, George, I am

the subjunctive is an esoteric mood,
even more abstruse in English than
in other languages, where the verb’s
conjugation highlights its presence,
in English, it’s nearly identical to the
indicative, the mood everybody
instinctively speaks in, facts

the subjunctive is about aspiration,
like the conditional, abstract, not
real, but its intention, rather than
the conditional’s inherent
impediment, a condition, shoots
for the stars, isn’t introspective,
but adamant, imperative

it is necessary that one be, it is
urgent that one have, it is
important that one effect, a
particular thing or event, all
subjunctives after the
doorkeeper word, “that”

one finds the subjunctive in
Shakespeare, master of grammar,
perhaps unparalleled in English,
a lot – O, that this too solid flesh
would melt, / Thaw and resolve
itself into a dew!
– and follows
with Elizabeth Barrett Browning –
Pardon, o pardon that my soul
should make, / Of all that strong
divineness which I know / For
thine and thee …,
for instance,
who is so profoundly indebted to
Shakespeare for her aesthetics

one wondrous day, I realized that
Proust’s entire À la recherche du
temps perdu
, his “In Search of
Lost Time
“, my Bible, was set in
the, French however, subjunctive,
the mood, there as well, of
possibility, therefore rather than
the definitive recreation of an
earlier time, Proust was
describing a sensibility, a personal
interpretation of a previous reality,
however bolstered by intimate and
apparently precise recollection of
shimmeringly imprecise, though
personally accurate, impressions

note here the similar preoccupations
of Proust’s contemporaries, the, aptly
named, Impressionists

everything, Proust was saying, as
were also the Impressionists, is in
the eye of the beholder

the subjunctive is the mood that
sets this instinct in motion

R ! chard

psst: Somerset Maugham I remember
being noteworthy as well for his
immaculate use, in his South
Pacific tales, of the subjunctive,
extremely elegant in its refined
construction, even with its
English austerities, like making
lace out of mere cloth, impressive
despite its impracticality, or
perhaps even because of it